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    dots Submission Name: shiningdots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsshiningdots
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    the world around me spins and i get dizzy
    i might as well just die if you cant see me
    im flying in the sky and youve gone crazy
    but i love you anyway cuz youre amazing
    a million times a day i see you shining
    and i wonder just how long you will be hiding
    i hate everyday that we are fighting
    youll never see me run away because im crying




    Submitted on 2009-05-22 13:34:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Its interesting, the decision to use no punctuation at all...You know who else does that? Of course you do! It sounds like a cute rhyming piece about someone you like. It is a littel confusing because you say -if you don't see me and then- we are always fighting... mabey it is someone who just sees the speaker as a friend?
    | Posted on 2009-06-01 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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