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    dots Submission Name: Para Ti, Mi Amordots
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    Author: Lavender
    ASL Info:    20/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 101/125/59
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 506
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       Always yours~ <3


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    dotsPara Ti, Mi Amordots
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    Te voy a dar todo mi amor.
    Te amaré siempre.
    Aunque a veces el amor se va apagando
    El nuestro seguirá.
    Aún nos vamos enveje ciendo
    Yo prometo quedarme a tu lado.
    Aunque pienses que mi corazón estará distraído,
    Te puedo asegurar
    Que no es.
    Cuando estás fuera de vista
    Mi corazón añora por ti
    Y tú eres lo único en que pienso.
    Tú eres mi mundo
    Y sé que soy el tuyo también
    Porque me lo has dicho.
    Te amo ahora
    Y te amaré siempre.

    ~Tuya~




    Submitted on 2009-05-23 16:48:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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