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    dots Submission Name: Raindropsdots
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    Author: Lavender
    ASL Info:    20/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 101/125/59
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 450
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 462



    Description:
       It was raining, heheh....


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    dotsRaindropsdots
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    Listen
    To the soft melody they play
    Just close your eyes
    To hear
    Their gentle pitter-patter
    Echoing a song
    Music of peace
    Of Harmony
    Falling from the heavens
    To the sturdy earth below
    Listen
    As it rings out a tune
    Falling, dripping, crashing, splashing
    Dropping, landing all around
    Listen
    To it's lovely music
    Listen to
    The glorious sound




    Submitted on 2009-05-23 16:49:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ha! This is delightful! It skillfully conveys that spirit of renewal and magic and mischief mood that a Spring Rain brings! And, it's just lighthearted and fun to read! Nice work!

    Of all things, I have a poem at my site with this exact same title. It was posted several months ago, so is not on my first page. Come by and check it out.
    | Posted on 2009-05-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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