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    dots Submission Name: For Alldots
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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    52 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1727/1248/246
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 81
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    dotsFor Alldots
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    For all he’s seen
    For all he sees
    And for all that he will view
    One colour will remain with him
    Her eyes of sparkling blue

    For all he’s held
    For all he holds
    And for all that he will kiss
    His bonnie lass will be the one
    For to give him total bliss

    For all he’s said
    For all he says
    And for all that he will speak
    Each loving word will sound just for
    His lass from Maddy’s creek

    For all he’s been
    For all he is
    And for all that he will be
    No other lass will make him whole
    Like his true love Emily





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      There it is again that old soul writing poetry to his one and only love...i love the feel of your poetry frank...i feel as though im being taken to another place and time..
    | Posted on 2009-05-27 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      It's great to see you're still the same romantic you were when I first joined ES, Frank. Emily is the right one for him. Yet another great read from you. Hope you're well.




    Abbas
    | Posted on 2009-05-25 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]
      Aaaah, there are lovely ladies, and then, there is Emily! And, for him, no other love could ever be!

    What a delightful and refreshing love poem this is!

    | Posted on 2009-05-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      you have the look of a sailor

    i bow four times and pray that without delay your rough hands will demand my olive flesh unthresh and untailor
    the every thread which leads to me.

    stay in peace
    | Posted on 2009-05-24 00:00:00 | by InNoMood44Play | [ Reply to This ]


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