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    dots Submission Name: North Stardots
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    Author: PrincessOfDark
    ASL Info:    17/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 22/31/25
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsNorth Stardots
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    I wished upon a shooting star...
    For the perfect man...
    But like that shooting star...
    The perfect man lost his glow...
    And died...
    So now I turn to the ever faithful north star...
    And wish the same thing...
    Because like the north star...
    The perfect man will always be there...
    Forever shining and glowing...
    All for me...




    Submitted on 2009-05-24 22:00:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      good illustration of the star system. making wishes do make dreams to come true. good poem , keep writing
    | Posted on 2009-05-25 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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