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Author: pedestrianpoet Elite Ratio:    8 - 7 /2 /2 Words: 92

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Life sucks and I am too bad to make that sound better. I am too tired to make this sound meaningful but it is, I swear! I feel I would rather give up on this than have nothing better to say. I use the word I too much, but when I express myself, there is no other way. When A. will look back on this, he will say: What is this junk? And then he will remember, that's the girl I met on a bench, who stood me up for lunch.

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