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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 647/1087/624
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    You are city sleeping softly Sunday evening
    Delicacy embodied, a bastard angel sifting through serenity
    You're the closest thing I have to sunshine, the best excuse I have for softness

    Now I pray to constellations, rockets, comets
    Anything to save us
    Will it be the suns and moons
    that answer the prayers?





    Submitted on 2009-05-26 23:41:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short but sweet but I didn't get the first line
    <You are city sleeping softly Sunday evening>
    It sort of confused me a little.
    But i liked it
    | Posted on 2009-05-27 00:00:00 | by kellz | [ Reply to This ]


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