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    dots Submission Name: A Haiku on Customer Service and Lifedots
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    Author: awastedsky
    ASL Info:    22/f/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    5.1 - 116/151/98
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Haiku/Comedy
    Total Views: 1352
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 97



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       I work for a well-known coffee company, and more than once have I been very tempted to hurl a 160 degree latte at someone's face.


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    dotsA Haiku on Customer Service and Lifedots
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    Frequently I want
    to say, "Dude........ seriously?"
    but I hold my tongue.




    Submitted on 2009-05-27 00:38:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    2: I dunno...
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      5-7-5 maybe not but I thought it was funny. I work in customer service and I actually think the same of the customer. "Dude....seriously" are my thoughts often.

    I liked it! Write on!
    | Posted on 2009-05-27 00:00:00 | by Kuuipo | [ Reply to This ]
      hahaha love it. Had to bite my tounge a couple of times today at the coffee shop!!! hahaha
    | Posted on 2009-05-27 00:00:00 | by igibson | [ Reply to This ]
      "Frequently I want
    every nice thing I see,
    but I know that's greed"

    ha. That would have been crap!

    But yours was cool imho.

    internet memes, they are not very poetic but...yes.
    | Posted on 2009-05-27 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a senryu but i'm not sure you wanted to know that... still, i'll say it (and yes, i've written hundreds of both).

    i've worked in cafes and restaurants before so i know this feeling well; i'm sure any front of house staff member will be able to read this and laugh... rather ironically.

    anyway, just a quick breeze through comment, really.
    | Posted on 2009-05-27 00:00:00 | by meoww | [ Reply to This ]
      Actually, that's wrong. To anyone who feels like commenting my haiku with criticisms regarding the standards of haikus: KNOW WHAT A [censored]ING HAIKU IS IN THE FIRST PLACE. THX!
    | Posted on 2009-05-27 00:00:00 | by awastedsky | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that a haiku must SAY something of possible interest to a reader, such as:-

    Frequently I want
    every nice thing I see,
    but I know that's greed.

    Have another think about your subject first, but be careful counting,--- the "every" I used above has 3 syllables for such a little word.
    | Posted on 2009-05-27 00:00:00 | by edcherry | [ Reply to This ]


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