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    dots Submission Name: My Angeldots
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    Author: totojane03
    ASL Info:    25- colorado springs
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 151/77/35
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 433
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 799



    Description:
       I fell in love with the man of my dreams,
    I cant express all he does for me but wow....


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    dotsMy Angeldots
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    There is a Feeling inside my heart I cant fully explain, It is making me go crazzy when we are apart baby.
    I know that my heart crys with a happyness so deep, telling me to watch my step for quicksand as you grab my hand making me melt even more than yesterday,
    And each day That passes us by I fall more and more in love with you,
    Knowing that when I wake up next to you and see you sleeping like a Angel,
    Or when we Take a short walk around the park, Or when you hold my hand, or kiss
    Or when we touch, Those are the things that I cherrish so much,
    And beliving with my heart that this will last forever and I will always remember the first day we met, And this feeling I can let go of or forget cause this is the truest love you could ever find.




    Submitted on 2009-05-27 13:02:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is wonderfully heartfelt. You can feel the love in this piece.
    | Posted on 2009-08-31 00:00:00 | by fictionalfiend | [ Reply to This ]


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