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    dots Submission Name: Winkdots
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    Author: SirSerenade
    Elite Ratio:    1.36 - 2/5/15
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 438
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 249



    Description:
       I made the sentence structure a bit unruly and whimsical.


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    dotsWinkdots
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    Wink at me--
    That when you think of me
    My heart sink
    For an
    Inkling,
    Shrinking
    For ink

    That you would drink of me,
    Glass clinking
    By the do stink
    Of meat.





    Submitted on 2009-05-28 11:13:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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