Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Prayerdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Colten
    ASL Info:    19/Man?lol/U of I
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 62/99/43
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 502
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 246



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsPrayerdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Dear Lord,
    Continue to stand next to me
    That we may stand up together,
    And together say, "servant" and "master"
    To keep moving forward
    Down the path to Heaven, the Arduous
    And Lovely.




    Submitted on 2009-05-28 11:53:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Sweet prayer thank you!

    Kuuipo
    | Posted on 2009-05-28 00:00:00 | by Kuuipo | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    174905

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    You Make Me speechless written by elephantasia
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Giving written by jjd
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Bond written by saartha
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry