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    Author: Colten
    ASL Info:    19/Man?lol/U of I
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 62/99/43
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPrayerdots
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    Dear Lord,
    Continue to stand next to me
    That we may stand up together,
    And together say, "servant" and "master"
    To keep moving forward
    Down the path to Heaven, the Arduous
    And Lovely.




    Submitted on 2009-05-28 11:53:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sweet prayer thank you!

    Kuuipo
    | Posted on 2009-05-28 00:00:00 | by Kuuipo | [ Reply to This ]


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