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    dots Submission Name: His Handsdots
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    Author: Morsketch
    ASL Info:    21/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 27/26/26
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 493
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 481



    Description:
       Merp.

    No, um, and now for something slightly different.

    methinks it should be more developed


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHis Handsdots
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    He has heavy hands,
    So sensual,
    So strong,
    Attached to muscled arms,
    The hands of a man,
    With an odor thick and musky,
    Smokey from his cigarettes,
    Only slightly mussed from work,
    With dirt under his nails,
    And scars on his skin,
    bare
    He uses those hands to talk.
    His hands tell you he's excited,
    He's angry,
    He's nervous,
    He's shaking,
    He wants you.




    Submitted on 2009-05-29 04:46:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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