In the house of my Father -------------------------------------------
The silence is dead these days
cut down shadow roses
grow old in a meme theory maelstorm
Become a new slang
when only the moon speaks true
Cool moon
Summer moon
Man in the moon
Go to the shop under the moon
Make love pale in the light
Little Moon men
Sattelite
Dream catcher
Dreaming of the good life
You know, they never saw him fall behind
He was this quiet man
Hooked on a lonely existence
when i read the title, i was thinking of a church or something... the first line agreed with my impression then after that i got lost and had to take the title more literally. as in father, the earthly father >.<
Maybe, maybe it needs another note. But really, I liked how the poem alighted itself down to those last lines, and there's sadness in the fact the son seems on the same track as the father, though I liked the thought that the father was dead, at least symbolically.
smellmyfinger is a fuc.knut. And is really quite hurt by your words on his words. Poor thing.
Submission Name: In the house of my Father
