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    dots Submission Name: Days that seem the samedots

    Author: totojane03
    ASL Info:    25- colorado springs
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 151/77/35
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDays that seem the samedots

    Today is not a very specail day,
    Its just like yesterday,
    Almost everything is the same,
    Nothing has really changed,
    I go to school,
    You go to work,
    I think about you all day,
    Impaicently waiting untill you get home,
    But while I sit here alone,
    I am imagining your warm embrace,
    The soft touch of your lips,
    And the way it feels when I run my fingers threw your hair and you hold me tightly, kissing me tenderly,
    Sometimes Just thinking this makes me cry cause I miss you so much,
    Wishing for the weekend,
    Knowing we will have alot of time then to spend together,
    And it does not matter what the weather may bring,
    Cause it will still be you and me.

    Submitted on 2009-05-29 15:30:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      im glad you are sober.
    you are a sweet ,sweet person.
    i loved it.
    it was so romantic.
    i get what you are saying. i barely see my boyfriend and when i do it feels like tiem is slippling away. but he is worth all those moments i waste...
    | Posted on 2009-08-25 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]
      I have had many days like this. and wished time passed by for the weekend of course at the time I was a drunk.
    Now I enjoy every moment!

    loved it!

    | Posted on 2009-08-24 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]

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