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    dots Submission Name: Walking Into The Unknowndots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 623
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    dotsWalking Into The Unknowndots
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    Singing through the tears,
    Wiping away the fears.
    Feeling this for the first time,
    Emotions on an upward climb.
    Having someone else there,
    Who genuinely cares.
    Taking it slow,
    Watching it grow.
    Keeping the fun alive,
    Allowing the laughter to thrive.
    Taking it step by step,
    A secret promise kept.
    A relationship unfolding,
    With a friendship strongly holding.
    Walking into the unknown,
    But not going it alone.




    Submitted on 2009-05-29 20:59:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Sometimes I feel like I am walking into the Unkown...Great write and flowed great! Added to my fav- Keep it up Girl....

    One day you may be famous!

    Totojane
    | Posted on 2009-06-22 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]
      It's good for a start, but try to chill on the rhyme a dime stuff.
    | Posted on 2009-05-31 00:00:00 | by nsc | [ Reply to This ]
      This is excellent! It is warm, reassuring, and comforting, and is rich with promise and the expectantation of better things!

    Nice work!
    | Posted on 2009-05-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like the title it goes well with this piece.
    It's up lifting and inspirational! It shows that walking
    with someone else is much better than going it alone.
    Nice work.

    Hope, Faith and Love
    Christie

    | Posted on 2009-05-29 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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