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    dots Submission Name: Love is the Reasondots

    Author: Doublefeather
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 71/61/33
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLove is the Reasondots

    Love is what you hold on to,
    In the middle of the night,
    The haven of truth,
    The strength to walk through the horrors and the fright,

    The beggar's wealth,
    The humilated's pride,
    The mute's tale,
    The dead's life,

    Love gives and inspires,
    Longsuffering and perserverance,
    The reason to walk through the fire,
    Yet it is the reason the end is so significant,

    Love is when you look for the amazing,
    In spite of the pain,
    And it's worth savoring,
    Like the wonderful aroma after the rain,

    The courage inside us all,
    The reason we press on,
    But what happens when we fall,
    Will this great love simply fade away and be gone?

    Submitted on 2009-05-30 21:05:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      your work is very honest. this is so true love is the reason for many things. but it is always possible to live without it. love is not the only thing that keeps people going but is very nice to have. once again nice work. you put alot of emotion into your work and its awesome
    | Posted on 2009-06-29 00:00:00 | by joezwells | [ Reply to This ]

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