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    dots Submission Name: My Owndots
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    Author: FallenAngelJC
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 47/53/41
    Words: 245
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       Something went wrong with my account and this poem got deleted...I just reposted it


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    dotsMy Owndots
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    I could have foreseen this at the first night...
    You Will Destroy Me
    An Ocean Of Passion, pulsing through my veins...
    You Will Destroy Me

    How long have I waited to see your skirt fly past me as you sing and dance...

    How have you burned desire like raging fire into my once calm soul...

    Why intoxicate me? breathing sweet new sensations into my mind...

    Losing all will, I would give you my world as long as I could become your puppet...

    I could have forseen this at the first night...
    You Will Destroy Me
    An Ocean Of Passion, pulsing through my veins...
    You Will Destroy Me

    Your Eyes conceal much more msytery than the light of the full moon

    Beauty, a word that was invented just for you

    When you dance, revealing your body, its like how an angel spreads her wings

    For you I dare to dream, of running my hands through your hair...

    You Would Destroy ME...
    Me, who knows nothing beyond books
    Of Me, who knows nothing but the sword
    For Me, who knows nothing but my melodies
    With Me, who knows nothing beyond my fields
    And Me, who knows only love...

    For If I could forsee this all within the first night, I would still gaze upon you
    Softly I would plunge my own into the ocean and drown without remorse...
    For you to be called
    My Own...




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      mmm its different but i very much enjoyed it. This post had me wanting more and the more i read the more i wanted to know, it defiantly grasped my attention until I was finished reading. great post...

    Jackz

    Sorry to hear it got erased I can relate
    | Posted on 2009-06-11 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]



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