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Black King

Author: Ghetto_King
ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4 /33 /54
Words: 329
Class/Type: Poetry /What is
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A friend told me to write this so i just thought about had writers block and when i woke up this came out

Black King

Black King
Millions of people screaming playing drums and pay homage at the scene
Tall dark with a crown on his head what I’ve seen
Shoulders abroad eyes shows wisdom and life struggles
At right sits his wife, queen, confidant and lover
Standing strong in front of a nation have I been deceive or is this just a dream
I awake but my minds state is different my head held high like this scene was scripted
As I realize what I am and the essence of my being
A young brother not with two strikes but a black king
Tall so I can see past my struggles right into my success
Shoulders broad to take world on my back like shoulder pads or a vest
The Lion hide is symbol of defeating world beast and his warrior mindset
And his wife by his side to show at the end of day where his heart rest
The people scream to show that he is leader and have made many conquests
Strong in mind body and soul and for knowledge his thirsty
Showing how you can jump life’s’ hurtles and win this contest
The drums a symbol of his heart which beats at a music’s pace
Which makes up his very walk and why his style is a certain way?
Black kings of pass who essence and souls now reside in us
Realizing what and who I am thus
Knowing I can take on the world and its many obstacles and each I will defeat
Making me strong when I’m weak right beside me my black queen
Knowing I have everything I need and can carry the weight of the world
And thirsty for knowledge opening my mind to a whole new world
Who I am, a black prince a descendant of great nation is which I withdrew
In a new kingdom with a nation that needs many leaders
Is it you?
Black King

Submitted on 2009-05-31 11:38:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  writer's block deosn't have anything to do with you.if thats what comes out of writer's block,then i want that.but no,its good.really good.-rachel-:)
| Posted on 2009-05-31 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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