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    dots Submission Name: Black Kingdots
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    Author: Ghetto_King
    ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
    Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4/33/54
    Words: 329
    Class/Type: Poetry/What is
    Total Views: 661
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1830



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       A friend told me to write this so i just thought about had writers block and when i woke up this came out


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    Black King
    Millions of people screaming playing drums and pay homage at the scene
    Tall dark with a crown on his head what Iíve seen
    Shoulders abroad eyes shows wisdom and life struggles
    At right sits his wife, queen, confidant and lover
    Standing strong in front of a nation have I been deceive or is this just a dream
    I awake but my minds state is different my head held high like this scene was scripted
    As I realize what I am and the essence of my being
    A young brother not with two strikes but a black king
    Tall so I can see past my struggles right into my success
    Shoulders broad to take world on my back like shoulder pads or a vest
    The Lion hide is symbol of defeating world beast and his warrior mindset
    And his wife by his side to show at the end of day where his heart rest
    The people scream to show that he is leader and have made many conquests
    Strong in mind body and soul and for knowledge his thirsty
    Showing how you can jump lifeísí hurtles and win this contest
    The drums a symbol of his heart which beats at a musicís pace
    Which makes up his very walk and why his style is a certain way?
    Black kings of pass who essence and souls now reside in us
    Realizing what and who I am thus
    Knowing I can take on the world and its many obstacles and each I will defeat
    Making me strong when Iím weak right beside me my black queen
    Knowing I have everything I need and can carry the weight of the world
    And thirsty for knowledge opening my mind to a whole new world
    Who I am, a black prince a descendant of great nation is which I withdrew
    In a new kingdom with a nation that needs many leaders
    Is it you?
    Black King





    Submitted on 2009-05-31 11:38:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      writer's block deosn't have anything to do with you.if thats what comes out of writer's block,then i want that.but no,its good.really good.-rachel-:)
    | Posted on 2009-05-31 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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