Half Closed

Author: SilentDreams42 Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 38 /30 /42 Words: 106

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Half Closed

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you built me up made me strong every brick in place but my windows are still half closed you tore me down crushing all all that I held dear but my windows are still half closed what now? where do i go from here? i let you in you built me up tore me down you loved me you hated me you cared for me you bruised me ive done all i can but my windows are still half closed can they see it in my eyes? i doubt it but i wonder... will they still come knocking?

Submitted on 2009-05-31 18:03:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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The way I enterpreteted this is having feelings for an ex and wondering why those feelings wont go away. If that is what this is about, I know what that feels like. It's even worse when you have to see them all the time. Anyways, good write, keep up the good job. =]

| Posted on 2009-06-01 00:00:00 | by xanarchyxdreamx | [ Reply to This ]

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