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    dots Submission Name: Soardots
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    Author: SilentDreams42
    Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 38/30/42
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       No matter what I do, or how I do it, I just can't please you. I can't please anyone. Not even myself.




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    dotsSoardots
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    genuine
    you fell from the sky
    each crevice a different species
    not one to tell a lie

    unique
    no two parts alike
    surely my heart
    that is what you aim to strike

    empathy
    it overwhelms your soul
    aching to share, aching to care
    never shall it part, it shall stay whole

    success
    it follows you as you tread
    through lifes obstructions
    not once have you fled

    regret
    when all is said and done
    you do me right
    as i do you wrong



    "im sorry.."



    its all thats left to say
    nothing less, nothing more
    i have come to realize
    your expectations still soar











    Submitted on 2009-05-31 18:06:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      steamrolling cousin. i likes this poem too much.

    | Posted on 2009-07-16 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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