Wanna break down
fall to the floor
Curl up in a ball
and die once more
Not decomposing
ravaged by decay
lost myself
yet here I stay;
don’t know what’s wrong
but nothings right
I’ve grown decrepit
Just fighting for life
Wanna pull the flesh
right from my bones
take a microscope
and look for my soul
And if you don’t
know me
you might just
think I’m crazy
but if you really
know me
you know how
it’s so very true!...
The voices in my head
Just won’t shut down
With all my smiles
being down upside frowns
could kill myself
or just better yet you
I loved this SO much....until the very last 2 lines.
dk, just might have done it differently?
the rest of it was amazing though <3.
And if you don’t
know me
you might just
think I’m crazy
but if you really
know me
you know how
it’s so very true!...
^probably tattooed inside my head now. pretty sweet <3.
really descriptive, in your face writing, even moreso than usual and I definitely like ;)
DAM! you have talent right off the bat I knew this was a fast pace read! I like how you went to one though then right onto the next as if we are also the ones feeling what you are writing and feeling as well I am in disbelief that I am the first to comment these people are nuts! Although I must admit the only part I felt that didn't fit or at least needs work on is...
And if you don’t
know me
you might just
think I’m crazy
but if you really
know me
you know how
it’s so very true!...
Other than this I truly feel its an amazing post!
Jackz
Also the ripping of your flesh and searching for your soul AMAZING description LOVED IT
Submission Name: decrepit
