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    dots Submission Name: Pulsedots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ohio State
    Elite Ratio:    6.06 - 174/189/127
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 61
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    dotsPulsedots
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    Lay rest
    your heavy head
    upon my sunken chest
    with a sense of satisfaction.
    Sleep sound
    and deep entwined
    with me
    suspended
    in your snake-oil skin.
    I'm hanging loosely
    off your contented breathing
    heaving
    out and in
    with each seductive tempest
    gale of passion, love, and sin.
    Your slender nails
    of window frost trace
    trails of quicksilver
    into my silhouette as runes
    of icy vice and pleasure
    illuminating each awkward imperfection
    and setting me at peace
    between your heartbeats.




    Submitted on 2009-05-31 21:30:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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