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    dots Submission Name: Dr. Kevorkian Patient File Submissiondots
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    Author: Morsketch
    ASL Info:    21/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 27/26/26
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDr. Kevorkian Patient File Submissiondots
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    Alone and disenchanted,
    In this darkened,
    Too silent tomb.
    The fan turns,
    The tock ticks,
    The heat rises,
    And that same old scab gets picked;
    Fresh wound in an old sore.
    As endless days inch by,
    Studying paint on a wall I know too well.
    It adds up,
    The turns,
    The ticks,
    The heat,
    The loneliness and the scabs and the scars;
    The heartbeat sounding through my chest

    And the black hole widens




    Submitted on 2009-06-01 04:46:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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