It Hits

Author: Whatamidoing ASL Info:    14 f scotland Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 2 /3 /6 Words: 132

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It Hits

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I see couples in the street and think, That could be me someday, Then it hits me, It will never be me. I see groups of friends out shopping and think, I have friends like that, Then it hits me, My friedns ask me out only when it suites them. I see people doing what they are good at and think, I should be doing what im good at, Then it hits me, Im not good a anything. I see the world and think, I could fit in here, Then it hits em, I dont fit in anywhere and never will. I see my life and think, Its been good, Then it hits me, It hasn't been good . So why am I still here then?

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