This site will self destruct in 2 months, March 17.
It will come back, and be familiar and at the same time completely different.
All content will be deleted. Backup anything important.
--- Staff
Roleplay Cloud -

Sign up to EliteSkills

Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

It Hits

Author: Whatamidoing
ASL Info:    14 f scotland
Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 2 /3 /6
Words: 132
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
Total Views: 898
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 760


It Hits

I see couples in the street and think,
That could be me someday,
Then it hits me,
It will never be me.

I see groups of friends out shopping and think,
I have friends like that,
Then it hits me,
My friedns ask me out only when it suites them.

I see people doing what they are good at and think,
I should be doing what im good at,
Then it hits me, Im not good a anything.

I see the world and think,
I could fit in here,
Then it hits em,
I dont fit in anywhere and never will.

I see my life and think,
Its been good,
Then it hits me,
It hasn't been good .

So why am I still here then?

Submitted on 2009-06-01 06:33:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!


Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?