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Author:	was_i_ever_real
ASL Info:	23 _ f _ tx
Elite Ratio:	8 - 194/91/52
Words:	49

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	594
Average Vote:	4.5000
Bytes:	415

Description:
you.
tell.
me.

Synergy

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We are
Cold Rhythm and
Fiery Beat
Creating silent Harmony,
beautiful simplicity
reacting on a loyalty
beyond accepted interpretation...
Destined from creation
an enigmatic relation-ship

We are
Elements stripped
to the most lucid form-
Born as one, but torn
A paradoxal same

We are
twin flames.

Submitted on 2009-06-01 13:18:47 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  My evil subconscious will probably want to steal some of these images at some point in the future, so I'll call them haunting, cold and hot flames, describes music indeed!
| Posted on 2010-07-27 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
  A relationship poem-- this is intriguing and a unique penning. You've taken a slighly different tack and I do like it indeed!!!
| Posted on 2010-05-06 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
  I woulda dropped the "-ship" But other than that, Wonderful work, Krys!!

[[and btw I loved the end]]

Carrie
| Posted on 2009-07-24 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
  ..krystle didnt write a description for this poem, so i will. These are the first thoughts on soulmates that krystle put together for a best friends tatoo that we are getting. there is no ending. this was just a beginning. since its going 2 be a tatoo, our goal is to take our best ideas and combine them into a much smaller verse. this is a very short poem itself, but it says a million things...if you read between the lines.
but i will say, that at this point (to me) our goal is far from accomplished, we want the poem 2 say twice as much, yet be half the lenght.
| Posted on 2009-06-12 00:00:00 | by PO3TiKPO1SON | [ Reply to This ]
  I thought the ending was week, it doesnt keep it in your mind afterwards, more like it just repeats the title. ASide from that I did thing there were some decent parts, relation-ship for instance, it isnt something that floors the reader, but thought it was a nice touch that could draw them in. You are the best judge of your own work of course.

-Craig
| Posted on 2009-06-01 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]

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