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    dots Submission Name: My world of dreamsdots
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    Author: minikitty
    ASL Info:    16/F/candy Cane lane!!!
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 4/1/1
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 623
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 438



    Description:
       I wrote this poem for a friend of mine and when he read it he cried it was a very important moment of my life this helped him out a lot so I've decided to share it :3


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    dotsMy world of dreamsdots
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    I see the world
    As a sea of dreams
    The people in it
    Do what they please
    But you should know
    The most important part
    The people in it
    Are artistic and smart
    Some like to laugh
    Some like to cry
    But in my world of dreams
    You can never die
    So take my hand
    And Iíll show you the way
    In the land of dreams
    Youíll live another day




    Submitted on 2009-06-01 16:24:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What a sweet, lighthearted poem. I have to admit I really like this itís nice to see some sunshine around this site, not only is this a positive poem, but it also captured my interest the second half is my favorite

    Some like to laugh
    Some like to cry
    But in my world of dreams
    You can never die
    So take my hand
    And Iíll show you the way
    In the land of dreams
    Youíll live another day

    Itís an awesome way to sayĒ DONĒT GIVE UP!Ē Iím glad you helped your friend with this poem, cause after all if your friends donít stand by you, then who will? Iím so adding this to my favorites by the way, and you better post up more poems cause you have got some talent hidden in that cotton candy brain of yours :)
    | Posted on 2009-10-11 00:00:00 | by TeaLeaf | [ Reply to This ]
      Its definatly an amazing write, there are times in life where you feel like there is no more happiness left in life and being given even the smallest thing could change that. and this is one of those small and sweet things.
    Fana
    | Posted on 2009-06-02 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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