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    dots Submission Name: Food for thoughtdots
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    Author: devil666
    ASL Info:    26/M/NewHampshire
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 9/50/38
    Words: 321
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFood for thoughtdots
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    Follow the society's ways and you are one of those good kids,
    People not abiding by those rules are labelled as misfits.
    So some people protest, some lazy fools stay mum & sit,
    Swimming with the ocean waves is easy but not against it.

    Foolish people do things just like their ancenstors did,
    Impart the same old teachings to their inocent little kids.
    Not using their brazen heads to think and bring changes,
    Following age old traditions since centuries and ages.

    New innovators are met with oppostion and resistance,
    The real ones come out victorious with persistence.
    This world devoid of originality, its full of these copycats,
    Took a Herculean effort to prove the earth was round & not flat.

    Humans believe what they're told and they lack vision,
    Thats why many people think Islam is the truest religion.
    Using lame arguments to defend themselves, whole point is missed
    Empty minds spread ignorance and we know that ignorance is bliss.

    Hollow minds blindfoled by rigidity and wrong beliefs,
    Ghosts of false knowledge in those minds never released.
    Working twenty hours in a company without overtime,
    People fighting for their rights are sacked in no time.

    Like goats in a herd, followers giving blowjobs to the society,
    Weak minds, weak souls bow down to the system & suffer quietly.
    Not just one individual it's millions that start a renessaince,
    Dangers are everywhere but we have to take this chance.

    Imperfections in the society can always be ammended,
    If that wasnt the case, slavery wouldv'e never ended.
    We'd still have sugar plantations with white slave masters,
    Neverending is this battle and courage is the key factor.

    First person speaking up is called stupid and retarded,
    Lack of support, so attempts of revolt are easily thwarted.
    Such is the fate of most of these innovators and visionaries,
    Most countries living in these dark ages, it's indeed scary.




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