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    dots Submission Name: it's time dots
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    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 540
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsit's time dots
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    it's time to see
    what life really is
    it's time to see
    what we can really be
    it's time to see
    the point to love
    it's time to see
    us being we




    Submitted on 2009-06-02 09:23:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great work! i seriously love it! Its short and not too explanatory.

    Fana
    | Posted on 2009-06-02 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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