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Wipe Out

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Wipe Out

Urging to decapitate,
the singular one begs;
a soup-bowl to create
after your brains are ate

Laughing as you die
all of us jump in circles.
Can hardly even sigh;
can't breath as you cry.

we want to rape you
we want to scrape you
we want to cut you
you see, we're dead too.

You can't fuckin have any
as we pull out your eyes
We're just choppin with no sympathy.
No longer shall we accept your lies.

Before you breathe your last sound
your first born is split open
with their organs dragging on the ground
shoved down your mouth with a grin.
Against me you have sinned.

Can't stop touching
you there, darling.
It's not my blood
I can't stop drinking.
Can't help in thinking
how else we'd get along.

I try to make some sort of sense
out of the shit you sent
and realize living isn't the problem.
I've had a job since I was ten.

It's just all you worthless shit-stains
who do and know nothing so well
and all you understand is pain
so I think maybe the human race deserves to be wiped out.

Submitted on 2009-06-02 09:28:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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