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    dots Submission Name: Sweet Lady From The Lowland Hilldots
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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    52 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1727/1248/246
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSweet Lady From The Lowland Hilldots
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    Sweet lady from the lowland hill
    Where the western wind does blow
    My thoughts meander to you still
    When you set my heart aglow

    How precious was our time we spent
    As we shared one beating heart
    With innocence and pure intent
    Knowing one day we would part

    Such longing still invades my mind
    My soul and spirit too
    I try my best to leave behind
    This love so strong and true

    But still I cannot meet this vow
    For you live within me still
    I loved you then, I love you now
    And I know I always will





    Submitted on 2009-06-02 18:28:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is delightful, as all of your work is. Makes me think of sweethearts that were lost from my youth that I still think about.

    Just a delightful, fun poem to read.
    | Posted on 2009-06-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This could be another love song! I imagine the tune to be something along the lines of "Michelle" by the Beatles; soft, steady guitar and gentle notes carrying these beautiful lyrics.
    Any lady would be thrilled to be remembered by you in this way!
    By the way, are lowlands anything like a marsh or swamp? Or are those called fens in your neck of the woods?
    Regardless of the geographical description, this is another wonderful tribute to love (and love lost) by you, Frank!
    Thanks for sharing.
    Take care!
    ~Laura
    | Posted on 2009-06-03 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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