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    dots Submission Name: A moments Daydreamdots
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    Author: totojane03
    ASL Info:    25- colorado springs
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 151/77/35
    Words: 242
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA moments Daydreamdots
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    I woke up this morning thinking about the past, and things that have not lasted,
    I stood by my window watching the rain fall,
    Wishing I could take our tears and send them away in a message bottle, never to return,
    But how do you tell tears Goodbye, I wondered,
    Then shortly after I thought I had the answer,
    Its simple realy,
    Clear out all the memories of the past yesterdays, the trouble they made,
    The pain they cause But healing the scars,
    Send them on a journey towards the stars,
    Then fill your mind with the Joys and happyness of now and the present time,
    I sat ther a moment as I smiled I noticed a Rainbow, Thats when I told myself,
    I am going to make a vow and send these tears away, I am going to work on mending and replacing them with the Joys of today,
    And keep a record of preciouse memories along the way,
    I am going to go on a journey in my dreams,
    Exploring the rain and the unseen,
    Maybe I will be able to join the rain where it comes from,
    As I make a new start ---mending my heart and telling these tears goodbye,
    And from there on there wont be any sadness or clouds in my sky.
    Soon after that the rain stoped and I fell asleep, in a peacefull dream, with clear skys and not one single tear.




    Submitted on 2009-06-03 12:41:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aww sad that you were sad. Tears are healing tho and the Lord catches each tear you cry and He keeps it. In fact, he wipes them from off your cheeks. Something to ponder maybe the next time you cry.
    | Posted on 2009-08-29 00:00:00 | by desolateheart | [ Reply to This ]


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