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    dots Submission Name: A letterdots

    Author: totojane03
    ASL Info:    25- colorado springs
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 151/77/35
    Words: 261
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA letterdots

    I am writing a letter not sure to who yet,
    But I bet when it is finished it will be my greatest one yet,
    It is going to be a letter from my heart,
    I am going to poor out all my feelings beliving that who ever I write this to will be touched and moved and maybe feel the passion in it to,
    I am writing a letter but have not been able to get but one word down,
    So far it says dear,
    If only I really had a idea of who to write to this would be so much easiyer,
    I want who ever I send this letter to when it is completed. I want them to cry for joy
    and excitetement and feel the emotions running off the page,
    I am writing a letter with many things to say,
    Hopefully who ever I am writing to gets this letter within a day,
    And hopefully they are inspried more then entertaint,
    I am trying to write a letter,
    But I am not sure what to say,
    As I sit here and think of who and what to write,
    There is only one person that comes clear in my mind,
    Just thinking of David makes me smile,
    I am writing a letter its going to be very small,
    It's going to say I love you David Most of All,
    I know it probly could be better,
    And its really small,
    And even though I want to write a big huge letter, this is all I got for now.

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      write me...lol...oh hey funny thing we have something huge in common...the ones we love so much share a name...david...lol...i couldn't believe it when i read this....check out ,y poem named david...lol... :D nice write...i like it...it made me smile...don't know why...but yeah...
    - ash
    | Posted on 2009-06-03 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]

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