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Moon Cheese on Ritz Crackers

Author: SammySueYou
ASL Info:    23/f/nm
Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 90 /78 /30
Words: 215
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I wrote this after a dream I had

Moon Cheese on Ritz Crackers

For just one night let us forget,
no more doubts and certainly no regret.
Let me take you for a ride,
on the twinkle in my eye.
Let our only evidence be the stardust that resides.
I can show you things to make your heart skip a beat,
beyond any big cities nor fatally ferrocious heat.
We can lie on the moon, and eat moon cheese with rits crackers,
I can show you how to touch my keypad in ways unlike a hacker.
We can surf orions belt on an enormous turtles shell,
up on mars which is coloured much like what we think of hell.
Nothing beats a picnic on a psychedelic moon beam,
the only thing that does is meeting you inside my dream.
Let's watch cartoons, or even cuddle up together,
my love for you is strong unlike a torn up love letter.
Do you recall your childhood at all?
my imagination was lucid, and infinity feet tall.
I thought that I had imagined every magical thing I could make,
but that was only until you made my heart beat again in a way much like an earthquake...
I am alive, more than I have ever been before,
I was happy when I met you and I could never ask for more...

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