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    dots Submission Name: one worlddots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 532



    Description:
       my mother's favortie piece ive done


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    dotsone worlddots
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    from the basketball courts
    to the dancers in ballet
    for the highschool cheerleader
    to the drunks of AA

    from the footsteps of greatness
    to the whispers of small
    its those thoughts and ideas
    that connect us all

    from the snow up north
    to the sand in your toes
    from flawless beauty
    to freckles on your nose

    from "growing pain" teen
    to innocence of a girl
    it serves to remind us
    we share one world




    Submitted on 2009-06-04 14:58:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The first one you sent to me, and one of the best I've ever read. I liked the rhymes you used. It has a powerful message of truth in it, yet, its also left up to the reader to interpret it to their own means. A great piece of work!!! Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2009-06-10 00:00:00 | by Dreamer5009 | [ Reply to This ]


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