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    dots Submission Name: Hurricane With Its Shelvesdots

    Author: bologna3
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    dotsHurricane With Its Shelvesdots

    Hurricane with its shelves
    Of where we should be:
    'Kay, man?
    I'm in the cay, man.
    Boisterous oyster spreads his fan;
    Meet my demand, he says,
    And the sand is raised.
    The sun brazed its sweet domain.

    So I could not be fain.
    I watched the slugs all slain
    'Neath the serrated edge of Sun,
    Porous when Mercury crossed,
    Or else embossed.
    I wondered about its qualities
    To a raconteur--a shiver, a stutter,
    A shimmer, a blur?

    Submitted on 2009-06-07 10:57:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. It blew me away because it's so different and creative. Never met such a poem before and now, just wow. Unconventional and that's what I admire such piece of writing!

    | Posted on 2009-06-09 00:00:00 | by Lilyan | [ Reply to This ]

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