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Author: sparkleshine
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Before we met I prayed for someone who was strong,caring,kind,loving,and understanding
Not believeing I could find that special someone
The day I met you I will never be able to put into words
For once in my life i was happy talking to someone
We were meant to meet
Meant to be together
that was destiny
We grew together
Soon we were as close as we both thought possible
Than you asked me four magical words and I cried
Replying yes
We grew stonger than we both thought possible once again
Listening to one another
Helping each other through everything
I knew than that my prayer had been answered
Knowing the one I had been searching for was finally found
We never judged for we both knew each other's pasts had been rough
We gathered out strength
Linked arms and headed down the long road ahead of us
When one felt unsure the other took lead never letting our hope die.
Never pretending or lieing to one another
For we knew judgement would get us no where
Being there for one another whewn stumbling
Knowing we would catch each other if we fell
The hardest part of this whole journey though was when you took me in your strong arms
Lookoed me in the eyes and told me the worst news ever
Ecen though the doctors said you were ill you didn't give up and you forbide me to
Even when time got tough and I wanted to lay in a corner and cry
You'd pick me up and take my hand leading us back on that path we had started on
THen i started getting scared as you grew weak and I knew it was my turn to lead unsute if I had the strength and courage without you being by my side .
But I knew you would never want me to give up
That's not what you taught me to do
Your battle increased and you slipped into a deep sleep
The doctor's said it was a comma
To me it was the beginning of loosing you
I held my head high like you taught me and you pushed through
Soon though you went back and I became terrified.
The doctors told us there wasa small chance of you pulling through
It was decided to let you pass away free of pain.
It was the hardest night of my life
Now it has been weeks and I miss you so bad
I still lay in bed at night at times crying when I need to be in your strong arms
Trying to be strong but struggling so badd
Wondering if I treated you the best I could
Helped you all I could have
Listened when I should have
Been strong when you needed me to be
Most of all though wondering why you had to go
I know you are still here and always will own a piece of my heart but
Its not the same
I miss you and want you back
Want to apologize for everything I did wrong
All the fights we had

Submitted on 2009-06-07 20:34:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  don't regret the bad times.
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