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    dots Submission Name: Judging a Book by the Coverdots
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    Author: Ghetto_King
    ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
    Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4/33/54
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/What is
    Total Views: 605
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 987



    Description:
       Talking bout judging someone referring it too a book like the sayin you should get it


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    Its more to me than my sight will ever show
    & more emotions than my ex girlfriends will ever know
    Through my eyes you see a
    Glimpse of my soul and my greatness.
    Go ahead look through my eyes and see where it takes you
    My words are just whisper of the man I really am
    But to here them you have to actually hear the words not just listen to them
    So I say again look through my eyes not at them
    From a far I might look like a young man
    But to know me you find much more and how the world has pour knowledge in me
    And the experiences that shows
    The cover of my book big in size and probably a few words that invites you in
    Looking pass my cover page to get to know me and begin
    Many people have read introduction and a few chapters but then lost there page
    But if you get to the end of book it will bear a friend that keeps a smile on your face
    Thee End





    Submitted on 2009-06-08 01:21:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      deffiantly something that every one should learn to live by
    | Posted on 2009-06-09 00:00:00 | by sparkleshine | [ Reply to This ]
      i always never judge a book by its cover.you are a great example of that.
    your work definatly is different than i would think of frist.so props.
    rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-06-09 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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