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    dots Submission Name: Memorydots
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    Author: ThisIsReal
    ASL Info:    22-M-Lost
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 182/194/88
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 59
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 808



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    dotsMemorydots
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    You walk with me
    on a cloudy day
    You walk with me
    when your skies turn grey

    Hand in hand
    on a pthless trail
    breathing air
    long gone stale

    The dust it covers
    what used to be
    casting shadows
    on you and me

    I am always
    here for you
    whenever you need
    something to hold onto

    but in vain
    you wander here with me
    looking for
    your lost tragedy

    I may be here
    by your side
    but I'm nothing close
    to a guide

    I can't take you
    where you wish to go
    but by now
    this you know

    I am him
    but he aint me
    by your side always
    I'm just a memory




    Submitted on 2009-06-08 08:35:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your forgot an "a" in pathless...but other then that fantastic work...its short but its to the point...it catches your breath and begs for more....leaves the writer wanting to know if he really becomes more then just a memory
    | Posted on 2009-06-09 00:00:00 | by Bloodlust86 | [ Reply to This ]



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