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    dots Submission Name: who i amdots

    Author: StylerDen
    ASL Info:    29/Male/Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 38/59/51
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       Something i may strive hard to say it freely..

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    dotswho i amdots

    You see me as who i am,
    A weak man, a wretched soul,
    I am but an ordinary man,
    A proud owner, little hope,
    Sometimes things i may demand,
    For the rights, for the bold,
    In faith together we stand,
    For the lives, our hands may hold.

    Submitted on 2009-06-08 11:53:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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