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I'm feeling good.

Author: Kio
ASL Info:    1?/male/Ireland
Elite Ratio:    3.04 - 8 /27 /25
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Class/Type: Misc /Happy
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I'm feeling good.

The world bears down on most people but not me, not today, not in this life. Maybe I will be reincarnated as someone who really does wear “what’s in” or cares that our world is being ravaged and destroyed by pointless wars with people of different races, creeds and beliefs. I just sit in my room, with my guitar, and stare out the window at the almost perfect sky on those summer days. I dare not go outside for it would ruin what I believe in. People outside are just there to bring me down, to poke holes in what I believe.

I feel like walking up to one of them someday and utter the small speech I have run over so many times in my mind: “I shall not conform to your idealistic view of ‘what’s cool’. I like that I dress in my jeans with my warmly coloured, striped, collared shirts and my nice dark green coat which looks like it was worn by an army officer. However, I will tell you what I do not like; I do not like those tracksuit garments that you call ‘clothes’. I do not like that you heckle and bully every person that does not submit to your pathetic, violent ways. And I know for a fact that anyone who wears those clothes, acts like you do and believes what you do will end up with a kid at 19, a crappy house and will be working for people like me. Yeah, stick that up your nylon covered ass.”

Nevertheless, people are cruel and, well just screw them. Social interaction with people I know and trust is the only thing I need, and my guitar.

Submitted on 2009-06-08 18:39:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I don't know why no one has commented on this, its absolutly excillent! I love your style of writing! This would be the perfect beganning to a story. It builds up the main character, and puts the reader in the mind frame of the person your writing about. I felt sucked into the setting of the story, only to be disapointed by the ending coming to soon for me. Keep going on this, don;t stop, your started somthing grreat!
| Posted on 2009-07-24 00:00:00 | by grimmreaper | [ Reply to This ]

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