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    Author: paulie d
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    dotsPAPER BURNT PEN DRIED----------------dots
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    Journal: PAPER BURNT PEN
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    Mood: trippin on life/a quiet mania

    PAPER BURNT/PEN DRIED

    Tall Paul is up at 130 am contemplating life,earth,movement and shadows. no caffeine involved just a poetic philosopher with no paper and a pen.no cardboard to sit on,no hard enuff times to sadden by,no awards to rest on and no skills to kiss ass.polite and well mannered takes me to patience's end and realizing my place is no picnic anymore.with my soap box gone weary to hold my weight no more, my voice only crackles for the..
    ...cont.-

    my voice only crackles for the cause, at the disdain i have, i had, i will have for the mass's ill conteplations i think they have toward me.

    tall paul-06/09/09

    chinski tell us of ur bluebird how you trapped him inside.
    how u held him so tite no one else could tell he was there




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