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You are my prisoner
As I am yours
Yet we hold each others key's within ourselves.
A key to unlock this hellish prison we built for one another
(and simply keep building on)
But we do not DARE share these keys
For if we did
We risk loosing one another
To this fast pace and crazy world
Yet if we stay on this same path...
My destructive way will only wear you down to practically NOTHING.
Your depression will only put me into a deeper darker whole.
So what are left with?
A shitting hand of life,
dealt to us that we did not ask for.
Submitted on 2009-06-09 02:06:36
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This is beautiful !!
It vibrates a true symphony of how difficult it is to maintain a relationship.
But the best part was 'You are my prisoner
As I am yours'
It ended a bit early though. I was thinking of getting a more elaborate view.
| Posted on 2009-07-05 00:00:00 | by
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I love you right now you know that, I mean i've been dying to read something along these lines for a really long time. It's terribly sweet and i'm crying cause i was thinking about someone while reading it, if that makes sense.
your really truly awesome in this one
| Posted on 2009-06-25 00:00:00 | by
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