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    dots Submission Name: Enjoydots

    Author: Lilyan
    ASL Info:    2 Elite Years / f/O.o
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 49/43/28
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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    Enjoy the rays
    of summer fun.
    Énjoy these days
    and smilng bun.

    Enjoy the dark
    of night with moon.
    Enjoy the sound
    of cheerful tune.

    Enjoy the air
    and find the fun
    Enjoy the blare
    and mighty sun!

    Submitted on 2009-06-09 03:10:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you can enjoy it as long as you wear sunscreen.
    at least here in flordia you need to.beaches aren't so nice.
    but its cute.really playful and like summer is remebered.
    | Posted on 2009-06-09 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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