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    dots Submission Name: Miserable Voiddots
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    Author: KimikoIkusawa
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/2
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       One of the poems I made back in mid-2007 along with "A Frozen Soul."


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    dotsMiserable Voiddots
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    Can you feel it?
    The walls are closing in
    The sky darkens, as if it will disappear from the world
    The presence of air is very heavy
    The ground becomes as unstable as quicksand
    You can feel yourself sinking
    Suddenly, the earth plunges down, carrying you down along with it
    You are plummeting down into a dark abyss
    All you can feel is sadness and hopelessness
    You want to see something different, something joyful
    But all you can see are depressing reminiscence
    The black chasm is filled with cheerless events of the past
    Your eyes won't close even if you want to
    All that can be done is to cry your heart out
    You shake your head to make the memories in front of you leave
    But they are all there to stay
    Visible in all directions, it is overwhelming
    There is no escape
    You are imperiously and reluctantly engulfed within a miserable void
    You maybe falling down endlessly, but the sadness still surround you
    Everything is being swallowed by sorrow
    There is no escape




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