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    dots Submission Name: ...temperate zone...dots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Riddle/Misc
    Total Views: 702
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    Bytes: 436



    Description:
       ~somewhere in the middle of this story something is whistling between the lines~


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    dots...temperate zone...dots
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    ...temperate zone...

    I shattered a glass
    in the kitchen sink
    as my wife slept Friday night

    narrow as the neck
    of a slender bird
    snatched from its lazy flight

    what happened? she asked
    have you cut yourself?
    then she gathered the slivers of white

    Im fine, honey, really.
    always am. then
    I switched off a distant light




    Submitted on 2009-06-09 12:05:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      OK I give up. What's the answer? And while you're at it, what's the question? Clues?
    | Posted on 2010-07-28 00:00:00 | by annie0888 | [ Reply to This ]
      funny where thoughts can go when doing dishes. i tend to go elsewhere, most days.
    breaks up the monotony. like when driving, and thinking gets in the way, and you realize
    you are almost to the end of the road and don't even remember going around the curves. it's always surprising.

    idk. this feels... something.
    | Posted on 2009-09-09 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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