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In the beginning there was a party in which a solo being sat and pondered for eternity. Each passing thought brought rise to new situations and he began creating these intense things which he visioned in his mind. Everything around him seemed to empty and dull because it lacked life, but in his visions he imagined it to be so, so he already had the Answer; he was to create Gods which would be separate in their own dimensions each doing a pre-programmed set of timeless and ancient events bringing about the reality we know, the reality we want to know, and the reality that we are forbidden of knowing. I have been there. This writing is little more than my testament of what I have seen.
This earth and everything we see was created with song; we were sung into being. Every sound we hear is music hidden to deaf ears and music is power that most can not understand to it's fullest. Beyond the power of music is the power of Anger. When one is in an intense rage and like in the "heat of battle" one is capable of pretty much anything.
Eternally The One Inside What's Beneath Behind thought of one that was more powerful than even he. He tried to fathom something greater, something beyond. He couldn't understand it, but could see it in his dreams and he found it fascinating. In it's light he created time so that he could watch it and view it and it could develop and he could understand it. Because time was created the Gods in most of the dimensions died. The Great One had all doors, all secrets, all truth layed out before him and he devoured it rapidly. As he digested the lifeblood of eternity Entities came to him to worship and beg for a place at his side. Some he found worthy to keep, and others he destroyed. With his new found allies he seen what must be done. He was the best. He was the most powerful and best connected. Was it not then his duty to own and rule everything beneath him? In his mind the right thing to do was to rule everything so he set out on a quest conquering wherever he may find. He destroyed, and killed, and slaughtered and burned and maimed his way through until only one place was left that he never set foot. When he reached it a smile came to him and he took residence in this last place that did not know his wrath with intentions to bide his time and party it up a little until the year 2012. When the time comes everything will belong to The Great One and nothing anyone can say or do will change it. The unworthy are doomed.

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