haiku #3 by latentlylyrical

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Submission Name: haiku #3 dots

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Author:	latentlylyrical
Elite Ratio:	4.79 - 717/600/133
Words:	14

Class/Type:	Haiku/Misc
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haiku #3 dots

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life in abundance
green hues alight with gold fire
noon sun in June fields

Submitted on 2009-06-09 18:26:34 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Takes me back to my country roots! Thanks for the memories!
| Posted on 2009-06-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
Nothing quite like a sunny day in June, with the sun reflecting all of nature's beautiful colurs.

Frank.

| Posted on 2009-06-14 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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