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My Ode to You
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Wrote it for my boyfriend ^_^ <3
My Ode to You
Before you there was no light
Only tears and sleepless nights
Then by mistake somehow I met you
You helped me bear what it is I go through
With every day I loved you more
From your crazy jokes to those tastey smores.
I loved it when you told me you'd wait
And how the thought of you makes me shake
Just your touch leaves a tingle behind
And there are moments with you I'd love to rewind.
Every time I hear your name
I dance and smile; I have no shame
The way you look into my eyes
Makes you so much different from other guys
Understand how much I love you
And that I'll be with you, my whole life through.
Submitted on 2009-06-10 07:48:36
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Wow, this is a fantastic poem!
I feel like it perfectly describes what true love is. Yet I'm not one to say, because I haven't found that special person, just yet. x) Keep it up!
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