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    dots Submission Name: My Ode to Youdots

    Author: PhantomRose
    ASL Info:    19/F/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 43/58/35
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 730
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 869

       Wrote it for my boyfriend ^_^ <3

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    dotsMy Ode to Youdots

    Before you there was no light

    Only tears and sleepless nights

    Then by mistake somehow I met you

    You helped me bear what it is I go through

    With every day I loved you more

    From your crazy jokes to those tastey smores.

    I loved it when you told me you'd wait

    And how the thought of you makes me shake

    Just your touch leaves a tingle behind

    And there are moments with you I'd love to rewind.

    Every time I hear your name

    I dance and smile; I have no shame

    The way you look into my eyes

    Makes you so much different from other guys

    Understand how much I love you

    And that I'll be with you, my whole life through.

    Submitted on 2009-06-10 07:48:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, this is a fantastic poem!
    I feel like it perfectly describes what true love is. Yet I'm not one to say, because I haven't found that special person, just yet. x) Keep it up!
    | Posted on 2009-06-10 00:00:00 | by indifferent | [ Reply to This ]

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