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My Ode to You

Author: PhantomRose
ASL Info:    19/F/Illinois
Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 43 /58 /35
Words: 141
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Wrote it for my boyfriend ^_^ <3

My Ode to You

Before you there was no light

Only tears and sleepless nights

Then by mistake somehow I met you

You helped me bear what it is I go through

With every day I loved you more

From your crazy jokes to those tastey smores.

I loved it when you told me you'd wait

And how the thought of you makes me shake

Just your touch leaves a tingle behind

And there are moments with you I'd love to rewind.

Every time I hear your name

I dance and smile; I have no shame

The way you look into my eyes

Makes you so much different from other guys

Understand how much I love you

And that I'll be with you, my whole life through.

Submitted on 2009-06-10 07:48:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wow, this is a fantastic poem!
I feel like it perfectly describes what true love is. Yet I'm not one to say, because I haven't found that special person, just yet. x) Keep it up!
| Posted on 2009-06-10 00:00:00 | by indifferent | [ Reply to This ]

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