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    dots Submission Name: Cliff Divingdots
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    Author: Dreamer5009
    ASL Info:    16, Male, USA
    Elite Ratio:    5.02 - 73/53/28
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 588
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 460



    Description:
       It seems a bit like a part in new moon. lol


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    dotsCliff Divingdots
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    I jump from the cliff
    falling with grace
    the land far below is stiff
    a friendly face

    The air rushes around me
    my heart's pounding hard
    there's no way out that I can see
    but an escape from the tragedy in which I starred

    The land extends further than the sea
    the dice of my fate have now been cast
    the ground rushing to meet me
    and now we are together at last




    Submitted on 2009-06-10 12:19:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      me too.
    i know i keep saying your good ,but you are!
    so keep it up please.i enjoy your work.
    rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-06-12 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]
      nice work.

    i like the reference to Caesar's dice.

    | Posted on 2009-06-10 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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